Support for your arguments - Can you do some more research to support your "solutions" to the problems of sexism? How do you know the "solutions" you propose work? More evidence, please.
I can clearly see your thesis statement of the paper:
" sharing economy companies like Uber have failed to enact stringent measures to abolish this negative behavior in the workplace"
Uber is just your case study, but the problem can extend logically to Lyft and all other ride-sharing companies. So, I would re-frame your paper as one about sexism more generally. Uber is your case study. Then, is it about sexism in ALL workplaces? Sexism in tech? Sexism in the sharing economy? Or sexism in ride-sharing companies?
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