You've had an opportunity to receive feedback on your proposal from a variety of sources.
Provide an addendum to your work in the form of an essay. You do not have to re-write the entire proposal
for this assignment. This is only an addendum. For context, include verbiage in the introduction indicating
that this is a supplement to your original proposal entitled "x".
Requirements:
Expand the resources/references you used.
Elaborate on proposed data analysis techniques
Discuss increasing the variety of data proposed
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