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address my tutor's comment and make sensory amendments in" rel="nofollow">in my dissertation.A literature review was very poor and would like to change but need to use the same article that I have chosen and needed to stick with the same themes that I come up with because my data collection tool is related to the literature review themes. Please address the tutors comment I am attachin" rel="nofollow">ing the 10 article which used for the literature review also, consider checkin" rel="nofollow">ing the attached reference as well