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  please follow the in" rel="nofollow">instructions that are given. must be on word Doc x and must be between 200-300 words. APUS CLE : ENGLlOl Do02 Spr 17 : Forums Page 3 of 4 Essay #2 is due at the end of this week. In your in" rel="nofollow">initial post this week, you should provide your next draft of Essay #2. Then, respond in" rel="nofollow">in detail to the drafts of at least 2 other classmates, usin" rel="nofollow">ing the questions below for evaluatin" rel="nofollow">ing as your guide: 1 1. Which sentence states the main" rel="nofollow">in idea (thesis) of the essay? Please explain" rel="nofollow">in how it is or is not a clear. Where is it placed, and is its placement appropriate? 2. What additional details could be in" rel="nofollow">included to help you better understand the essay? What is missin" rel="nofollow">ing or unclear? g, 3. Are the details covered in" rel="nofollow">in a logical sequence? Which ones, if any, seem out of place? 4. What part of the essay is most memorable? Why? 5. How do the transitions, such as “furthermore,” “for example,” and “next," used to help the ideas in" rel="nofollow">in the paper flow logically? If they do not, or are missin" rel="nofollow">ing, which ones would be useful or need to be E changed? if 6. How does the author provide the reader with a sense of completion at the end? If completion is missin" rel="nofollow">ing, what suggestions do you have? 7. What kin" rel="nofollow">ind of grammatical errors, if any, are evident in" rel="nofollow">in the essay? 8. What fin" rel="nofollow">inal suggestions do you have for the author? Please use the questions above and answer each question for the drafts that you evaluate. This way, the writer will have thorough and helpful feedback for revision of the draft. Do not post attachments to the forum. Type your answers in" rel="nofollow">in the text box provided or paste your material from Microsoft Word. Make your in" rel="nofollow">initial posts to the Forum by 11:55pm ET, Wednesday. Initial posts should be at least 200- 300 words. J Students are expected to post on three separate days each week for full credit. Durin" rel="nofollow">ing the week, read the messages posted by your in" rel="nofollow">instructor and classmates and join" rel="nofollow">in the discussion. Your in" rel="nofollow">instructor may ask questions, provide explanations, and in" rel="nofollow">include lin" rel="nofollow">inks to other resources. T Please respond to at least 2 classmates, and in" rel="nofollow">in your response posts, try to brin" rel="nofollow">ing together pieces of the discussion and take those ideas further. To earn a higher grade on each week's discussion, students are expected to post more frequently. Postin" rel="nofollow">ing three times in" rel="nofollow">in a week will earn a grade of a C. Four posts of high quality accordin" rel="nofollow">ing to the rubric will earn a B, and five high quality posts accordin" rel="nofollow">ing to the rubric earn an A. 1 Remember, the Forums are our place for classroom discussion. I Your response posts need to be at least 50-100 words, and all posts are due by 11:55pm, ET, Sunday. £3 ForumRubriclOl .Qdf 0 Mobile View https://edge.apus.edu/portal/site/3 51782/tool/777c33bd-ca13-4bad-89da-1ed44b729b36/disc... 7/5/2017