1 Overuse of adverbs.
2 Too many prepositional phrases.
3 Ambiguous (“Squinting”) modifiers.
4 Misuse of lie/lay.
5 Ambiguous pronoun references.
6 Comma splices.
7 Run-on sentences.
8 Wordiness (inflated sentences
INSTRUCTIONS: think about the quote you choose: is it that vital a point? Could there be something better to use? instruction: NO OUTSIDE SOURCES WILL BE TOLERATED..
the assignment asks you to pick one issue AND IMPORTANT ONE NOT JUST ANY…LOOK AT THE INSTRUCTION FILE ATTACHED.. and analyze it…
Pick a quote and analyze it. in detail rather than try to cover the entire reading. use one quotation instead of several. And proof-read before submitting.
AGAING….you only need to write one solid paragraph and avoid summarizing the reading.
What is the most significant issue from this part of the text, and why?
OTHER: You need to work on your writing. For instance, how are Bose and Jalal presenting India in a 'vulnerable' light? And the first two sentences of the second paragraph do not make sense.
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