Providing feedback on an NGO letter

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Choose one letter and evaluate the quality of the letter using the following questions. A response to each question will be written instead of writing a formal paper. Even though a formal paper will not be written use a formal writing style, e.g. complete sentences and no use of first person.

Select a letter to use for the feedback exercise from the file of letters.
Copy/Paste the questions below at the bottom of the sample letter you are critiquing.
Using track changes, make corrections and provide feedback within the sample letter you have chosen.
Type the feedback related to a specific item directly below the question (below the questions you copied/pasted at the bottom of the sample in which you provided feedback).
Submit the assignment using the submission link.
Your submission should include the sample letter with your name and the number of the letter you chose at the top; feedback in track changes; and a copy of the questions below, answered, at the bottom of the letter.
Questions to be Addressed (yes/no answers will earn zero points. You must describe or explain your answers).

Was the writer’s approach appropriate? Describe.
Was the request clearly written and easy to understand? Explain.
How did the argument/information support the requested amount?
How clear was the flow and organization of the letter?
Did the facts and assumptions make sense? Explain.
Did the writer support the facts adequately? Explain.
How could the letter have been approved? Describe and use track changes.
Did the writer use proper grammar and mechanics? Identify the errors. Do not list. Indicate in track changes.
Was the use of APA correct? Identify the mistakes.

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