Research Skills and Project Planning

Research Skills and Project Planning Order Description This is my dissertation proposal , and I have received this comment from my supervisor . Please update the proposal according to the below comment . I am afraid that you need to make some amendments to your research skills assignment, your lecturer has the following comments: In order for this to achieve a pass grade you have to make the following amendments: 1. More current literature must be included in the introduction 2. More current literature must be included in the literature review (most references come from the 1990’s) 3. A clearer explanation and justification of the research strategy – including sampling, ethics and limitations 4. The submission must be written in the third person If you could work on this please, and re-submit by the beginning March please.