screenplay Short Film (it's a Dog's Life)

screenplay Short Film (it's a Dog's Life) Order Description Australian English please. Basically it's the same story of the previous assessment but in" rel="nofollow">in this assessment the lecture asked me to improve the format, particularly dialogue, is not quite right and the pages don't time to what is needed for the exercise. ( I NEED TO SEND YOU MY STORY TO WORK ON IT)