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I need this rewritten as per the feedback below:
This is a poor presentation. It is completely descriptive rather than analytical. It is not clear how did you identify the internal factors (R&C) and the external ones. How about the strategy and its fit? sustainability!. Your work needs to be revised in order to address the main objectives of the assignment. You should analyze yourself and research to support your ideas.
For your resit, you could address the following:
- Focus on Internal analysis: Resources & Capabilities-R&C of HD (Use academic models)- Grants list. Check thereafter, the sustainability of those R&C [Test them using academic model as well-the CC test or Barneys model].
- The fit between the strategy and the internal R&C-Start by defining the HD strategy and then address the fit of the strategy with the identified R&C. Ask: does the deployed strategy utilizes the R&C and avoids weaknesses [Drawing R&C assessment matrix might help] 3-Threats should be identified using academic model to analyze external factors [porter 5 forces and / or pestle] and then again check the fit with the deployed strategy and deduce what is giving HD advantage over other competitors.
- What are the recommendations for the future? and why. Don't forget the notes, references and assignment format.
You have utilised some acceptable sources for your work (i.e. Grant, Pickett, Hoffman, etc), but then this not visible from your analysis. It might be useful to go through their work with more attention and see what they have said.
This is a very short presentation and not nearly long enough to answer the questions for this assignment.
You have used in-text citations in some slides and nothing for the rest. Anything that is taken from another source should be referenced.
The referencing format on some occasions is not correct (reference list). Refer to university guide for reference (Available on NILE). The referencing in this report needs to be updated with respect to the pre-mentioned guide.
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