The following information request letter contains errors in grammar, spelling, and mechanics. The general format of it is acceptable; however, I want to see some form of listing technique in the body of the letter that asks questions.
April 1, 2017
Ms. Carol Mintus, Manager Convention Services Mandalay Bay Resort and Casino Las Vegas, NV 87550
Dear Ms. Mintus:
Can the Mandalay Bay resort and casino provide rooms for 75 guests and there familys for either july 18-22 or August 4-8?
My company will be hosting a four-day combination sales conference and vacation retreat for 75 of our engineers, product managers and salespeople. Please answer the following questions to help us chose a suitable resort; What are the room rates and room sizes? Are discount rates available for off-peak seasons or corporate customers? Do you have three conference rooms available that would accommodate 25 people? We would need theses rooms for one and a half days. What size are these rooms? Do the conference rooms have audio-visual and computer facilitys? What entertainment possibilities are available for the familys of our staff? Do you have facilities for us to host a banquet for 140 people one evening?
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