Make this a TV news package. Make the story between 1:15 and 1:30 in length. That's between 225 and 270 words, not including directions. (Directions are what tell me, for example, who is doing the talking, when you have b-roll, and who is being supered.)
Be sure to describe the b-roll. I know that you didn't literally film anything. That's fine; just describe the scene in a few words.
Format your story for easy reading. For example, use all caps for the directions and mixed case for the speakers, just like the sample story does.
Be sure to follow the proper style for television. That is, always start your story with the anchor on camera and then go to the reporter on camera. Also, the reporter should be last on camera before going back to the anchor for the tag. The middle part of the story is your b-roll, VO, and SOTs.
Be sure to include two, and only two, SOTs. The SOTs must be from two different sources; that is, single-source stories aren’t permitted.
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