Vague or filler words

Read your draft out loud. Listen for vague or °filler words (including the forbidden ones), awkward, wordy, or unclear sentences, and obvious grammar errors. Mark these problems on your draft. Determine if you've added enough detail to your profile. Have you described the environment and people within your profile? Have you included dialogue? Have you stayed in the same tense throughout your profile? Does your point of view work for your purpose and audience? Does your profile have a clear angle?                                                

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