We want privacy but cant stop sharing" by Kate Murphy but I think he followed different thing cz that's what my prof commented on my paper

He was suppose to follow the article from google 'We want privacy but cant stop sharin" rel="nofollow">ing" by Kate Murphy but I thin" rel="nofollow">ink he followed different thin" rel="nofollow">ing cz that's what my prof commented on my paper. This is what my wrote on it " I'd like to hear more about your writin" rel="nofollow">ing process and how you arrived at the ideas and language of this essay: e.g. pre-web patterns, the privacy paradox, and "the revolutionary developments in" rel="nofollow">in the configurations and platforms of human in" rel="nofollow">interaction" of the thesis statement. The essay also doesn't follow the assignment, sin" rel="nofollow">ince it uses secondary sources other than Murphy's article. Before I can give you a grade, please send me an email explain" rel="nofollow">inin" rel="nofollow">ing your thin" rel="nofollow">inkin" rel="nofollow">ing process, how you came up with the ideas, how long it took you to write this, and any other relevant in" rel="nofollow">information about this paper as soon as possible. Thanks, Prof. " So NOW i DON'T KNOW WHAT SHOULD i DO. Either you re do the essay or do what my professor ask to do. Writer was suppose to read the article and answer one of this in" rel="nofollow">in the essay. " Choose A OR B In the article “We want privacy, but Can't stop sharin" rel="nofollow">ing,” Kate Murphy refers to be a behavioral theory made popular by two psychologists in" rel="nofollow">in the 1970s. The theory explain" rel="nofollow">ins that personal relationships developed by slowly exchangin" rel="nofollow">ing private in" rel="nofollow">information until an in" rel="nofollow">intimate connection is formed. Write an essay in" rel="nofollow">in which you discuss whether or not you thin" rel="nofollow">ink this (pre-in" rel="nofollow">inter) theory applies to today’s over sharin" rel="nofollow">ing society. Do you thin" rel="nofollow">ink that revealin" rel="nofollow">ing an abundance of personal in" rel="nofollow">information too quickly (particularly onlin" rel="nofollow">ine, where it can be viewed in" rel="nofollow">instantly by a multitude of people) reduces a person’s ability to create meanin" rel="nofollow">ingful relationships, or do you thin" rel="nofollow">ink society has adapted to a new way of in" rel="nofollow">interactin" rel="nofollow">ing and formin" rel="nofollow">ing bonds?Use examples from your personals experience to support your thesis. You may also use examples from somethin" rel="nofollow">ing you’ve read or viewed to support you ideas. In the course of writin" rel="nofollow">ing your essay, you must refer to the article “WE want Want Privacy, but Can’t Stop Sharin" rel="nofollow">ing” and it’s ideas. The evaluation process ( at work or school) is in" rel="nofollow">intended to in" rel="nofollow">inform people about the quality of their work and to help them improve their performance. However, in" rel="nofollow">in the article “We Want Privacy, but Can't Stop Sharin" rel="nofollow">ing,” Kate Murphy considers an opposite poin" rel="nofollow">int of view. “ bein" rel="nofollow">ing watched” results in" rel="nofollow">in high stress levels and “less in" rel="nofollow">individually and creativity.” Write an essay in" rel="nofollow">in which you discuss the act of bein" rel="nofollow">ing observed or evaluated and the effects you thin" rel="nofollow">ink this type of assessment has on an in" rel="nofollow">individual’s performance or self-esteem. Use examples from your own life (either on or off-lin" rel="nofollow">ine) to support your thesis. In the course of writin" rel="nofollow">ing your essay, you must refer to the article “ We Want Privacy But Can’t Stop” and it’s ideas.